Sunday, September 21, 2008

I Am Still Me Comments

Rating: 4.7

I am something that I wasn’t suppose to be
I was human full of love and purity
Now I am savage a selfish killer
Who loves his own dignity
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Asif Baloch
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allison seibert 16 April 2020

wow! ! I really like this goes to my fav list +10 a lil similar to my ARE U THERE regards anjali (Report)

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Naidz Ladia 04 April 2009

fix yourself and don't be confused..you're still you...

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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 October 2008

'I kill myself every day every night With brutality I don’t know when that day will come When I will become we Cause till now I am still me' A very nice idea is here. Lovely.

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Evaughn Gray 04 October 2008

wow that was really deep, so true, reallty good emotions i love them.. i was truly speechless, keep writing~ Hazel G.E

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Anna jonson 26 September 2008

good poem..enjoyed................

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Asif Andalib 26 September 2008

A very nice poem. You have got 9.5

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Greenwolfe 1962 24 September 2008

This is really good. No wasted words. The meaning and purpose are clear, the story is complete. The only reason it does not get a ten is because I reserve that for poems which are unique among poems. This one is good though, worthy of a 9.5 . GW62

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Mehreen Mujeeb 24 September 2008

Good rhythm and meaning. Expressed well, with a lot of depth.

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Reshma Ramesh 24 September 2008

good work.....well done

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 24 September 2008

indeed a very deep insight into human nature and how it just walks headlong into all sorts and manners of corruption simply to get head.

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Tj Becker 23 September 2008

I am impressed with your insight of humanity. Greed and power can corrupt us all as we struggle to survive in a world that sees and respects only power. Well done

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Ana Dasilva 23 September 2008

great poem....thanks for sharing.

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Seema Chowdhury 22 September 2008

welcome to poemhunter. i liked your selection of topic and you did justice to your poem. well done and hope we'll see more poems in the coming days. good luck! !

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Kesav Easwaran 22 September 2008

you said it right, Aijaz...many here won't admit...

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Sathyanarayana M V S 22 September 2008

Few days ago I sent a message to Mamta Agarwal on how a poets gets into the shoes of another person/object and writes a poem feeling the feelings of that other person or object. This is a perfect example of such great writing....Almost like the conceplt of my new poem HOT KILN, I wrote inspired by the behavier of my friend.Very well expressed, clean, lucid and powerfulll..........10++++++

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Koyel Mitra 22 September 2008

Nice realistic poem.A 9 from me.

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Emo Seb 22 September 2008

love it. great job on another great poem.

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Pooja Ladyluck 22 September 2008

'i kill myself..........' beautifully xpressed......thanx! ! !

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Ashraful Musaddeq 22 September 2008

'I kill myself every day every night With brutality I don’t know when that day will come When I will become we' Wonderful lines! Shabash.10 for this.

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Anjali Sinha 21 September 2008

wow! ! I really like this goes to my fav list +10 a lil similar to my ARE U THERE regards anjali

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