I Am Still Me Poem by Asif Baloch
I Am Still Me
I am something that I wasn’t suppose to be
I was human full of love and purity
Now I am savage a selfish killer
Who loves his own dignity
Once I was loved with respect
To all kind
Now they are scared and terrified
Of my sight
Just because of greed and to get
Higher authority
I kill myself every day every night
With brutality
I don’t know when that day will come
When I will become we
Cause till now I am still me
This is really good. No wasted words. The meaning and purpose are clear, the story is complete. The only reason it does not get a ten is because I reserve that for poems which are unique among poems. This one is good though, worthy of a 9.5 . GW62
Good rhythm and meaning. Expressed well, with a lot of depth.
indeed a very deep insight into human nature and how it just walks headlong into all sorts and manners of corruption simply to get head.
wow! ! I really like this goes to my fav list +10 a lil similar to my ARE U THERE regards anjali (Report)
'I kill myself every day every night With brutality I don’t know when that day will come When I will become we Cause till now I am still me' A very nice idea is here. Lovely.
wow that was really deep, so true, reallty good emotions i love them.. i was truly speechless, keep writing~ Hazel G.E
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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11/17/2025 9:21:01 AM # 1.0.0
A very nice poem. You have got 9.5