Saturday, April 25, 2009

.... I Am Sorry.******** Comments

Rating: 3.6

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Streams of apologies
Runs through my heart
The tears of regret
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Eyan Desir
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Giselle Joseph 14 September 2009

You have proven to the world that there's finally a man out there. It takes alot of courage to say that you're sorry. An apology well written very deep indeed.

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Lady Grace 28 June 2009

asking an apology is a sign of good manners doctor..nicely written..grace

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Janell Cressman 16 June 2009

made me cry, not many guys i know would say i'm sorry, a really good poem! ! ! filed with regrect and sorrow over something done, very nice poem

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Kimbaline Navas 04 June 2009

this is nice...the hardest thing is to realize that you was wrong but to write it too good job

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Smiley Hooker 14 May 2009

it takes a real man to say 'I'm sorry'. saying it again tells otherwise. show out the best in you and be happy! : -)

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Jester's P 13 May 2009

the poem '...I am sorry...() ' is a stron g message of maturity- to say sorry is diffecult to some because it shows weakness, however, it is a strenght that contoured the inner part of our human tendency to love, to believe and to hope for what is best and good. the poem has its own style that is qualified to be a master piece in the descipline of poetry.

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very heartfelt you said alot in just a few words very good....10++++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 05 May 2009

Simple and touchy poem.10++ from me.

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Angelic(Annie) Female 05 May 2009

I like it.. so deeply regretful and am sure, the person whom its written for, will melt with the streaming tears, and will return to you with remorse, and together you both will build mansions with love, and empires.. 10 for u! !

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Maria Barbara Korynt 05 May 2009

Fine apologising perhaps will break the heart beloved? Everything depends on it, what your hero did mischief. However the fact that he is able to admit to having made a mistake and to say is important 'I was wrong, I apologise'. It will improve his situation certainly. Very much I like your poem, because it is talking about the respect for the second man. An admission of guilt and repairing, what was bad, are just showing not only feeling, but also the respect to the man. Because... when it is possible to be friends, to love, and what's more to know, if the respect was missing? It isn't possible. (10v.) Greetings for you. Maria Barbara Korynt

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Anjali Sinha 05 May 2009

so poignant but so sweet --this poem good write anjali

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U seem like such a generous man....dont feel sorry/ i did that and i got no where if they dont forgive just move on ur only hurting ur self! ! 10++++

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Anthony Arias 02 May 2009

Write like you speak. Give the biggest picture with the fewest words. Go way deep inside to find what you really feel. And it will always be good. Oh Yeah, Eat words for breakfast.

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Ken E Hall 01 May 2009

I'm sorry you did not say why you were sorry for what which makes me sorry for not knowing why you are sorry and I am about to retire felling sorry, hope you feel better soon, and remember smile though your heart is aching...regards

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Identification Accepted 30 April 2009

hmm...not sure what you did but nice poem. good luck with everything

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Miriam Maia Padua 30 April 2009

a very nice gesture...very gentleman written with sincerity.. a poem that sends questions in my mind... anyway, a nice write... 10++

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Joey Infante 30 April 2009

nice piece you have there...

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Kesav Easwaran 29 April 2009

sorry and apology can have few more names...Eyan- one of them could be...10

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natshka danda 29 April 2009

expressed emotion. truthfulness runs through it. They say to err is human but to forgive is divine but i daresay to forgive is human too. We know forgiveness first from people then God This poem should thaw the heart of this Icy Queen

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Barry A. Lanier 29 April 2009

Gosh the power and sincerity of the apology.....don't know if it was to Meg...or whom....but you have this reader wanting to give you a hug....it's allright...to err is human....to admit it is beyond...to apologize in humility is sacred

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