Sunday, September 1, 2013

I Am Society Comments

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When is it too soon to love somebody?
When you're sure you love them,
How can society tell you its too soon?
How can society control your actions?
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Mohabeer Beeharry 01 September 2013

A brilliant determination. I love it. Beside society is a vague word and is constantly at discord with itself. Well written.curt but pointed. Mohabeer Beeharry Read my poem and comment sometime.

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