Thursday, February 2, 2006

'I Am So Drunk. Life Is Great! ' (A Long Poem) Comments

Rating: 3.6

Smoke filled the air
and also my lungs.

I exhaled my newport
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Genevieve Surrender
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Hugh Cobb 02 February 2006

A good write, Ms. Van Dyne. The journey is smooth and the poem flows well and carries the reader along. This is one of your best. Regards, HDC

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Gina Onyemaechi 02 February 2006

What a sad twist of fate you've suffered, speaker! Easy-reading, enjoyable write, Callisto. Your 'Mother, May I' is one of the poems that got me hooked on this website back in December. Regards, Gina.

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Genevieve Surrender

Genevieve Surrender

Columbus, OH
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