' i am ' sky
my colors are my moods
' i am' light blue when i'm at peace
' i am ' dark blue when i'm troubled
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Wonderful imagery and imaginary. The inscription on sky and qualities as per colors according to your mood has been fantastically made. I appreciate the way of your presentation. Thanks for sharing.
i am sorry for my late response and i thank you so much for coming to my page and commenting
i am sorry for the late response and i thank you for coming to my page and commenting
i am sorry for the late response and i thank you for coming to my page and commenting.
I love the images in your poem. Thank you for commenting on What Remains.
the light rains is my contentment of a new birth. the rainbows is my heart at rest. ' i am' SKY....good one
A great write depicting your moods in different colours- - To my poem list ! Let me quote- - ' i am ' light clouds when i'm in thought the stars are my teeth in a smile with the universe. the lightning bolts is my anger in full fury. the heavy rains are my tears.
i have got a same view of water you may like to read it check out my poem be like water and thanks a lot for this nice poem which refresh my mind
Great experiment in which sky is nicely personified. Grand spectacle. Thanks.
A lovely poem. Beats words for it is terse and goes to the heart with a message so clear yet also simple you wish you had written it yourself for daily everyone is sky. I love this poem.
A masterpiece of masterpieces Louis. What a beautiful description of the sky in all of its glorious splendor. I especially love the line The stars are the teeth in my smile. A beautiful and awesome description. Truly loved this!
very nice..colours express your thought..and you are the sky.. lovely poem indeed.. and you got 80 votes for that.. kudos..
i am ' sky my colors are my moods..... in emptiness u r everything... housing numerous stars, beautiful moon and rainbow to refelct your mood and elegance...10 read mine.. i could hear.... serious thought and rain has come
Your teeth are like stars they come out at night. Couldn't resist Louis, I think a great description if you were trying to describe the universe to a blind person. Well rounded.
A very unique use of metaphors. I like your colors. Lovely. Warm regards, Sandra
Revisiting this poem, a captivating write, its beauty never ends!