Sunday, March 29, 2009

' I Am ' Sky #4 Series Comments

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' i am ' sky
my colors are my moods
' i am' light blue when i'm at peace
' i am ' dark blue when i'm troubled
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Bharati Nayak 31 January 2024

Revisiting this poem, a captivating write, its beauty never ends!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 April 2020

Wonderful imagery and imaginary. The inscription on sky and qualities as per colors according to your mood has been fantastically made. I appreciate the way of your presentation. Thanks for sharing.

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Lee Boueri 05 December 2019

Lovely read, lovely images.

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Louis Rams 14 December 2019

i am sorry for my late response and i thank you so much for coming to my page and commenting

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Louis Rams 14 December 2019

i am sorry for the late response and i thank you for coming to my page and commenting

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Louis Rams 14 December 2019

i am sorry for the late response and i thank you for coming to my page and commenting.

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Jane Campion 03 August 2019

I love the images in your poem. Thank you for commenting on What Remains.

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Louis Rams 03 August 2019

if you see the images then I have achieved my goal

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Prabir Gayen 09 March 2019

the light rains is my contentment of a new birth. the rainbows is my heart at rest. ' i am' SKY....good one

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Louis Rams 29 January 2019

thank you my poetic sister for your wonderful comment

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Bharati Nayak 29 January 2019

A great write depicting your moods in different colours- - To my poem list ! Let me quote- - ' i am ' light clouds when i'm in thought the stars are my teeth in a smile with the universe. the lightning bolts is my anger in full fury. the heavy rains are my tears.

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Savita Tyagi 20 July 2018

Lovely. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.

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Pratik Rajani 04 October 2017

i have got a same view of water you may like to read it check out my poem be like water and thanks a lot for this nice poem which refresh my mind

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Louis Rams 15 August 2017

thank you for your kind words

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Rajnish Manga 15 August 2017

Great experiment in which sky is nicely personified. Grand spectacle. Thanks.

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Sarah Mkhonza 10 December 2016

A lovely poem. Beats words for it is terse and goes to the heart with a message so clear yet also simple you wish you had written it yourself for daily everyone is sky. I love this poem.

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Louis Rams 10 December 2016

thank you so much for that lovely comment

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Patricia Grantham 24 September 2013

A masterpiece of masterpieces Louis. What a beautiful description of the sky in all of its glorious splendor. I especially love the line The stars are the teeth in my smile. A beautiful and awesome description. Truly loved this!

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Wahab Abdul 20 May 2013

very nice..colours express your thought..and you are the sky.. lovely poem indeed.. and you got 80 votes for that.. kudos..

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Roneece Pieters 11 September 2010

it was so beautifully true.

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Rachel Butler 19 November 2009

'The rainbows is my heart at rest' Rachel Ann Butler

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i am ' sky my colors are my moods..... in emptiness u r everything... housing numerous stars, beautiful moon and rainbow to refelct your mood and elegance...10 read mine.. i could hear.... serious thought and rain has come

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Christine Kerr 02 April 2009

Your teeth are like stars they come out at night. Couldn't resist Louis, I think a great description if you were trying to describe the universe to a blind person. Well rounded.

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Sandra Fowler 30 March 2009

A very unique use of metaphors. I like your colors. Lovely. Warm regards, Sandra

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Vaibhav Pandey 30 March 2009

a good imaginative write.......10

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