Monday, July 18, 2011

I Am Sharing Who I Am With Everything Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have this so called openly heart,
I don't save what is not good for me and my mind
I share every happiness and sorrowness I have
I feel every touch if I share my life with every species n the nature
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 18 July 2011

Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A world of treason' on page 4. Thanks in advance. Warmest regards Akmal

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Joseph Poewhit 18 July 2011

Some doors have rusted hinges

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