Friday, May 6, 2011

I Am Selfish. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am selfish for breaking the promise to you,
Letting my urges take control,
I am sorry,
I just hope,
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Hallie Luster
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 06 May 2011

Nice poem. Very well conceived. Rich in imagery and style. Fine poetics. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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