Wednesday, March 18, 2009

I Am Sad Comments

Rating: 5.0

It’s such a joyful day!

A rainbow glitters in the bright sky,
Majestic as it arches over Heaven.
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Alex Gomez
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Seairra Kyger 24 June 2009

awwww i hate those days when everything seems so happy but you

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i like this one. sometimes no matter how wonderful everything around us is, we still remain sad because truly Happiness is within our hands.. cheer up..there's always a reason to smile..

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Maria Isabel Oropeza 30 March 2009

I agree with the one below me. First, I read the title, preparing my mind for a depressing blow. Then you talk of positive things, and through the middle, I think ' Oh, he's being ironic, if not funny.' Then you just slap down that last line and all I'm left with is 'Whoa'. This was a great poem. I liked it. Elizabeth

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Stephen Black 24 March 2009

WOW Alex I just found out that its acrostic as well as sophisticated. Very hard to do. BRAVO! (Thnx for pointing that out to me! Same for the Help Me Save Me =])

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Stephen Black 23 March 2009

Whoa! I felt like you just slapped me in the face! You talk about a joyful day with rainbows and visages painted with cheer right to darkness encompassing your soul. Wham! ! !

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Juneil Sechico 22 March 2009

very expressive! good!

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Breeanna Mcelmurry 21 March 2009

ow thatz so pretty. your very good.

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