Saturday, November 22, 2014

I Am Running Faster Comments

Rating: 4.8

Friends, I can't run with you,
But I enjoy all fun with you,
You do something and me a talker
You are splinters and I am a walker,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 May 2018

I think this is your BESTEST POETRY AS PER PH 'Tis lovely like my best one is Moms Smiles.. WHEN my father died he told me perhaps he'd be alone no friend..then a few years before he died i came home he said ur my friend after a few years he died satisfied I have yet to compse one on him he had GUTS LIKE A LION I SEE HIM IN YOU SIR AKHTAR SAHAB

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Siddartha Montik 27 September 2017

Yes Sir.. we can't run with Strangers on heels though they are behind us! ! we just try and make our Pace.. Thank you for fitting Poem Sir 10+++!

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Rajnish Manga 15 January 2017

Wonderful portrayal of the young javelin thrower and her lovely running and throwing action. It has a two pronged effect- one, for the athlete and another for the lover of the sport, as an onlooker who also has an eye exploring details of the player in action. Lovely poem. Enjoyed. . How can I what you perform. Present is for you I am living in the past,

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Asis Biswas 05 September 2016

yes indeed, i can see, you are running fast with your writing.specially, when you are writing on girl.

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 30 August 2015

Very nice poem. Let's keep on writing and reading.

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Ruma Chaudhuri 04 May 2015

Beautiful poem. I love to read it. Ruma

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Ruma Chaudhuri 04 May 2015

Beautiful poem. Ruma

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Valsa George 23 November 2014

Yes, a woman is a great motivational force for a man though men hardly admit it! Glad that you are not miserly in your praise of women! Enjoyed!

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