Sunday, July 5, 2009

I Am Robot Comments

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I am robot,
built and brought to life
emotionless
bolts and nuts where my heart should be
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Brooke Boulanger
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Adeline Foster 03 August 2009

Ah, Brooke: What did you do to deserve people who love you? You were born, a wonderful reason enough. Remember that, and in about four years you’ll be able to say, ”Thank You! ” This is a dear little poem that expresses the turmoil that all young girls go through on their way to adulthood. As painful as the transition may be it is worth the journey, as long as one treads carefully around those snags along the way. Adeline (Tongue in cheek, may I point out that you did, indeed, make a mistake. In the forth line I think you meant to say ‘where’ instead of ‘were’.)

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