Tuesday, March 2, 2010

I Am Pure Love, Comments

Rating: 5.0

when I act like I'm not
Don't believe me.
I change everyday,
I'm nothing that you can
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Marie Bliss
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There is nothing like ‘pure love'… the attraction between a man and a woman is the biological process nature has endowed in both just to facilitate reproduction… all other feelings are conjectures

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 May 2016

Though i have walked through lifetimes of pain, anger, regret and violence I'm none of these. Those are not things I am. experience teaches us and mend our ways and if we are God-seeking we land in pure love.... thank you dear poetess for your sublime views..... tony god bless u

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Emma Adamyan 02 June 2010

10/10. short, smart and directly into the heart

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David Abrahams 28 May 2010

Very, Very Nice. 'When I act like I'm not, don't believe me.' Brilliant.

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Dew Twinkle 24 May 2010

love it, the first three kines, how I get that I idea, ha ha. keep it Marie, really like your poems :)

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Dulakshi Wakista 03 March 2010

I really loved and enjoyed your poem.Well expressed.Lovely poem.Thanks for sharing.

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Zack Burton 02 March 2010

I love this poem, but I can't help noticing the spelling errors. Beleive - Believe and arn't - aren't. It's jagged, jumpy - good

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