when I act like I'm not
Don't believe me.
I change everyday,
I'm nothing that you can
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Though i have walked through lifetimes of pain, anger, regret and violence I'm none of these. Those are not things I am. experience teaches us and mend our ways and if we are God-seeking we land in pure love.... thank you dear poetess for your sublime views..... tony god bless u
Very, Very Nice. 'When I act like I'm not, don't believe me.' Brilliant.
love it, the first three kines, how I get that I idea, ha ha. keep it Marie, really like your poems :)
I really loved and enjoyed your poem.Well expressed.Lovely poem.Thanks for sharing.
I love this poem, but I can't help noticing the spelling errors. Beleive - Believe and arn't - aren't. It's jagged, jumpy - good
There is nothing like ‘pure love'… the attraction between a man and a woman is the biological process nature has endowed in both just to facilitate reproduction… all other feelings are conjectures