When I was just 18 months old
My real father left me
You stepped up
And raised me as your own child
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lifes beauty is that tragedies go side by side, , , , , i like the emotions expressed here for your fathers, , , , both, , ,
Emotional and heart rendering. You've revealed ur heart in this poem buddy. Good work! !
uve gottin urself all it takes 2 b a poet. dats luv and its very interesting dat u hav a father dat luvs u dat much. nice piece
blazing excellence of fatherly love when ingrained as transcended by the soul......unique piece, i like it with all its lucidity,10/10, thanks for sharing
This is a great tribute to your father, With excellent word flow and discriptive stanzas.Very well thought out, Victoria.
great poem i love this one o did one about my father also, well my dad never left me but i didnt know my dad until i was 13 so yeah i know how you fell great work
your father is a rare breed & i think then that makes you a rare daughter, the love you portray on this poem cannot be measured in words.