Victoria Tori

Victoria Tori

Away from all these love sick puppies
Tuesday, March 11, 2008

I Am Proud To Call You My Father Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I was just 18 months old
My real father left me
You stepped up
And raised me as your own child
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Victoria Tori
COMMENTS
Kefentse Sathekge 25 August 2008

your father is a rare breed & i think then that makes you a rare daughter, the love you portray on this poem cannot be measured in words.

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Rani Turton 16 June 2008

This is a beautiful emotional poem and bravo for it.

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Sadiqullah Khan 22 May 2008

lifes beauty is that tragedies go side by side, , , , , i like the emotions expressed here for your fathers, , , , both, , ,

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Poras Sharma 25 April 2008

Emotional and heart rendering. You've revealed ur heart in this poem buddy. Good work! !

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Iromidayo Omowole 21 April 2008

uve gottin urself all it takes 2 b a poet. dats luv and its very interesting dat u hav a father dat luvs u dat much. nice piece

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 25 March 2008

So heartfelt and beautiful...........

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Dr.subhendu Kar 15 March 2008

blazing excellence of fatherly love when ingrained as transcended by the soul......unique piece, i like it with all its lucidity,10/10, thanks for sharing

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Howard Johnson 13 March 2008

This is a great tribute to your father, With excellent word flow and discriptive stanzas.Very well thought out, Victoria.

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~ Soldier ~ ~girl~ 11 March 2008

great poem i love this one o did one about my father also, well my dad never left me but i didnt know my dad until i was 13 so yeah i know how you fell great work

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David Bailey 11 March 2008

aww that was wonderful

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