in me the maddness of the universe
how do i begin to control
the big bang happens everyday
rippling upon my soul,
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I rated this a ten (though I don't believe in ratings) and consider it worth reading twice, as the intensity in it and thought-provoking lines make the reader reflect.
An insightful rendition embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. A well crafted and nicely thought-out piece. Thanks for sharing Richard.