Monday, September 1, 2014

I Am Patient Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am patient my dear as you leave
for work in the far off country
I patiently wait and take care of myself
days seems to be months and months
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Charity Nduhiu
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Chinedu Dike 28 January 2017

Patience, which is an integral part of real love is aptly captured in the piece. Beautiful depiction of a mighty spiritual experience that is love, elegantly brought forth from the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing Charity.

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Abigael Muthoni 22 November 2016

Continue being patient he will be back

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Mithilesh Yadav 22 January 2016

Mam greater one i am really surprised by such a innocent and pure expression of feelings...... glad to read your poems..... your a clear hearten lady....... in HIndi i can say you Deviji..... grrt

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Mj Lemon 18 August 2015

Indeed, patience brings many rewards. This is a magnificent poem. A 10.

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Allotey Abossey 16 July 2015

If there are few words left to be written, and few things to be said, I will gear them towards God, love and kids. I see much in this poem. Love truly is patient. Love it, and God bless you

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Phanice Wamukota 09 July 2015

He must be a KDF, haha, lovely peace Charity

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Akhtar Jawad 19 November 2014

An impressive description of emotions and love of a lonely wife whose husband is away to work and feed and maintain his family.

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John Ugolo Umah 19 September 2014

Wow! What a patient woman fill with love for her husband even when he's not always there for her, hmmmm, I love this poem, becaused it taught me that patience is act for great people. Thank you charity, this is wonderful...

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Gajanan Mishra 03 September 2014

very very fine piece of art. thanks.

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