I am patient my dear as you leave
for work in the far off country
I patiently wait and take care of myself
days seems to be months and months
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Mam greater one i am really surprised by such a innocent and pure expression of feelings...... glad to read your poems..... your a clear hearten lady....... in HIndi i can say you Deviji..... grrt
Indeed, patience brings many rewards. This is a magnificent poem. A 10.
If there are few words left to be written, and few things to be said, I will gear them towards God, love and kids. I see much in this poem. Love truly is patient. Love it, and God bless you
An impressive description of emotions and love of a lonely wife whose husband is away to work and feed and maintain his family.
Wow! What a patient woman fill with love for her husband even when he's not always there for her, hmmmm, I love this poem, becaused it taught me that patience is act for great people. Thank you charity, this is wonderful...
Patience, which is an integral part of real love is aptly captured in the piece. Beautiful depiction of a mighty spiritual experience that is love, elegantly brought forth from the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing Charity.