Thursday, April 4, 2019

I Am Out Comments

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I am out

They tell me of the dog
-feel arrow in my heart.
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Nassy Fesharaki
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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 April 2019

The moment of being out is amazingly expressed in this brilliant poem.

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Nassy 05 April 2019

Thank you very much for your kindness.

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HB Rita 04 April 2019

Is this poem about a man who needs to be ashamed of what he has done?

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Douglas Scotney 04 April 2019

I'm relieved the person had no hand, Nassy

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Nassy 05 April 2019

Hey Douglas, you know what I mean, it is better to be separated from this mean world...

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