Leaves covering my body
laying
on earth
on soil
...
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It is true..it is deep.. too keep yourself... from being found.....iip
LOVELY..SIMPLY DEEP..THE IMAGERY AND THOUGHT BOUNDLESS
This is simply great. Gives rise to so many thoughts, so many interpretations........thickly woven enigma of a poem
Well penned. A poem that I can read over and over again.. thanks for sharing.... God bless!
Umm mmm, that feels so good..you discribe this phenomenon with visceral gusto! ~
very elegantly put... da topic of da p[oem has been handled very nice
Spoken as a true wife would moon light soft upon such hair for a women such as this has no real regrets Nice soft touch upon the word
whether 'simply' poetry, or based on life, this is so raw, and so honest, that it makes the reader feel...which is of course, the essence of good poetry... later sweet swede..Richard..x..
The gravity of the moon controls the shifting of the ocean's tides, The warmth of a woman's love dispels night's darkness in encroaching eyes. Shane
congrats, your poem suggests truth nothing but truth, so that a woman..in relation to a man welldefined...........................
wow! wow! wow! this is superb, short, but glad i didn't miss it :) Preets
Woman loves the nature and the nature too loves woman Is there any difference between the nature and Man? Well done Pia.
I agree with all of the below and I will add that you have such a fine expression Love duncan X
This is so beautiful.... reflections of love can be seen..... wonderful imagery.
Wow! I love this poem. Very well said and the way love and intimacy should be.
So lovely Pia. Your poem has beauty in it's simplicity. Thank you. Simone :)