I Am Now A Man Comments

Fantastic poem conveying all the spiritual elements.

her delicacy, her colors are greatly penned in your poem and has sucked your love, as if, it's a man, very interesting one, thanhs for sharing the poem with us

A wonderful poem that has been woven with the beauty of nature embedded with love. Brilliant write beautifully crafted.10

My love brought her close! ! Love and art. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

I see the great transformation in this poem where the object of beauty deflects itself into the beholder and the beholder becoming the beauty himself! A lovely write! A10

Tarjans of us we are moving plants fiery animals and now sad worse at times from our ancestry gentle was it but man has ruined man's name what will be will be artificial intelligence and internet pro to types one has yet to see what man will out of us one day ma

incredible we ll have even orchids genes animals all by now know an admixture of nature tadpoles to fish to weeds and seeds to banana and grape vines peaces mulberry and maple what ever name ye we all have their genes ask apes where they came from and jumped from tree to tree made

Beauty in man and man in beauty! It is a beautiful merger sanctioned by plan divine. A lovely sentiment touched with conviction.

You can choose to examine the repercussions of any action, or delight in the scent of the now. You are a man, Akhtar; a man I am proud to know.

I love your use of the word, naughty. This kind of love is predominantly limbic, instinctual. The release of chemicals is autonomic, the evolutionary purpose is continuing the species; the physiological responses are hard to control; especially if you don't realize what is happening.

Wow! My friend you have exceeded all beauty of expression. A wonderful poem.++++++10