I Am Not Yours Comments
I am not yours, not lost in you,
Not lost, although I long to be
Lost as a candle lit at noon,
Lost as a snowflake in the sea.
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B) The poem beautifully expresses the longing to lose oneself in love, much like a candle's flame merging with the daylight or a snowflake dissolving in the vastness of the sea
A) the poetess's quest for a more passionate and sublime love—one that transcends the boundaries of self and identity. Unlike possessive or restrictive love, the poetess desires a love that is based on fusion and dissolution.
You love me, and I find you still A spirit beautiful and bright, Yet I am I, who long to be Lost as a light is lost in light. .../// beautiful loving expression; fantastic poem shared
such a beautiful great feelings......greatly penned.......great 10++
stupid all of it plain hurtful stupid a lot of grief for someone that i will never know or at least i dont think so
how is it stupid bcuz thats not wat im understanding poetry is about how u feel inside and out its like all of ur feelings just poor out on a peice of paper and u letting them go...... so plz help me understand
well of course you deserve to be a free spirit how would i know that i left any impression not all that observant it never occured to me no one had ever really paid attenion / wonder why wow i was so wrong /i was going to ask help but who would believe that he was going to try to kill me /////it is all my fault
I am enamored by the captivating beauty of this love poem studded with exquisite expressions and is sweetly rhymed. Thanks. I quote: Yet I am I, who long to be Lost as a light is lost in light.
Has such a nice rhythm and rhyme...and then you hit that final word. Haha. I hate when poets use similarly spelled words and think it's a substitute for similar-sounding words.
Wow! One of the best love poems ever. I'm not really a fan of love poems usually, but I may just add this one to my favorites list.
Piece of great elegance, subtly penned in romantic diction to capture it's deep of insight and essence of the poem. A beautiful romantic and love poem indeed. Superb! Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.10/10
Smooth, plain and fantastic flow of words. Love the stanzas! Just splendid!
Incredibly beautiful. How wonderfully tender. Sara is truly one of the greatest spirits ever to have lived...
A beautiful expression of love. Every line is superbly written. The last stanza is an intense sum up. I was deeply moved.
A beautiful expression of love: 'Long to be lost as a light is lost in light'. Every line is superbly written. The last stanza is an intense sum up:
A beautiful expression of love: 'Long to be lost as a light is lost in light'. Every line is superbly written. The last stanza is an intense sum up: Oh plunge me deep in love- put out My senses, leave me deaf and blind, Swept by the tempest of your love, A taper in a rushing wind.
A passionate love willing to take the plunge in being loved ST is as always a passionate woman.
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7/19/2025 4:17:20 AM # 1.0.0
C) Most deserving as The Classic Poem Of The Day! Congratulations! 5 Stars full