I gaver this poem a 10 because I find it to be quite unique in its formation and in its rhyme scheme. Most poets or would be poets give up on the rhyme when
they alter the structure in mid poem. You did not do so. You stayed with the rhyme all the way through. This makes this poem pure gold to me. I'm going
to list it asmong my favorites for the reasons I stated. Wonderful!
GW62
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I gaver this poem a 10 because I find it to be quite unique in its formation and in its rhyme scheme. Most poets or would be poets give up on the rhyme when they alter the structure in mid poem. You did not do so. You stayed with the rhyme all the way through. This makes this poem pure gold to me. I'm going to list it asmong my favorites for the reasons I stated. Wonderful! GW62