Friday, May 30, 2008

I Am Not The Same As You Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am not the same as you..
This I hope you will see..
I thought what we had was special..that you really believed in me.
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Butterflies In My Belly Forever
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Greenwolfe 1962 13 June 2008

I gaver this poem a 10 because I find it to be quite unique in its formation and in its rhyme scheme. Most poets or would be poets give up on the rhyme when they alter the structure in mid poem. You did not do so. You stayed with the rhyme all the way through. This makes this poem pure gold to me. I'm going to list it asmong my favorites for the reasons I stated. Wonderful! GW62

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