Wednesday, September 16, 2020

I Am Not The Moment You Find Me Comments

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I am not the moment you find me
a little bit more: few years or a day
few colors have embellished my brown skin
others have faded on the way—
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Jaya Das
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Suresh Kumar Ek 21 September 2020

The identity crisis is nicely painted

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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 September 2020

A well crafted poem. Truly wonderful....10+++++++

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Varsha M 16 September 2020

Beautifully written and expressed. subsided in the deeper parts, none of them I am keen to show I cannot hide them all for very long you can discover a few if you stay, yet the moment you find me it is me who has lived these many days.... beautifully written. Thank-you.

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