Tuesday, December 1, 2009

I Am Not Crazy! Comments

Rating: 4.8

So what if I see things?
These hallucinations as you call them,
How are they a big deal?
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Kylee Bartz
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Dylan Burkhart 28 October 2010

I really like this poem writing and what it says

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Claude H Oliver Ii 04 June 2010

An asylum can be a metaphor for many things. Good write. Keep writing. Sometimes it is the only path to sanity.

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Iron Panda 23™ 12 May 2010

i looovess this! ! talking ducks wearing white coats is creepy....& i believe u! ! if u say u sees that stuff then i believe it! ! i see facies & shadowlike figures & magic-like dots fly past me (really fast) all the time when u'll get out....idk but maybe those kool aliens could help u! ! (:

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Gita Ashok 12 May 2010

There is so much truth and honesty in this poem. I am sure all of us can relate to it at some point of time in our lives. Very well written.

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Yoni Assis 11 May 2010

Excellent! I've actually been meaning to write something like this, but haven't been able to find the right 'spin.' Very funny.

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Shady El-shafie 11 May 2010

Nice details :) Keep it up

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Nerisha Kemraj 11 May 2010

u can't help but smile :)

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Joseph Macquarrie 02 February 2010

my people think i am crazy but i keep telling them i am not no one listens to me 10

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george george 01 December 2009

Fantastic! Great expression of uniqueness - good job!

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John Ode 01 December 2009

madness...I love it.

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Kylee Bartz

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