Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, August 21, 2013

I Am Not Arrogant Comments

Rating: 5.0

As people put and want
To paint me little rude
But it is all preludes

Why some one should feel afraid?
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 August 2013

Some Girl By sitting things out and observing a lot over time, we come to realise....truth.....from propaganda :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 August 2013

Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR Yes, an egotistic proclivity as well as a regular agenda of opportinistity carries questionable artistic merit. However I must say I am a bit taken aback in seeing this stance coming from someone who recommends his own work in the box that is meant to recommend poems you have read by others & were especially moved by...between that, and the obvious need to copy & paste comments you have received on other sites than this one, has admittedly got me scratching my head a tad....BTW: I believe you would garner far more positive feedback if (1) You did not alienate 80% of this sites membership by posting many of your poems in hindi, and (2) You found it in your own ego to swallow pride and actually read & critique those who have been regular loyal supporters & commentors of your work, here, on PF, despite your polarising actions. Look, don't portray me or this feedback wrogly, as it is merely an I.M.O. based on personal observation. I realise that I have NOT been one of your regular supporters, and certainly have never expected to be one of yours. I hope you take my opine and advice in as positive a vein as it may not have came across, but was meant to be. Good Luck in your literary travels & Be Well ~FjR~

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 August 2013

Re: I am not arrogant (Score: 1) by ApplesSt.Pain on Friday, August 23,2013 (19: 17: 09) too weak, put the kids to sleep, blanket your sin to keep warn, thoughts wash a shore, I can do so much better, I've had my head up in a cloud, I start to wake up to the truth I can't do this any more, I'm just too weak. put the kids to sleep..

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2013

awesome Jill Scrivana36 minutes ago I really like this a lot the theme of honesty is prominent Comment +1 Great context Glad Mubiangata35 minutes ago thanks for sharing good job keep it up

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2013

awesome Lara Lynne36 minutes ago EXCELLENT! I loved everything about it. Well done. Comment +1 well done

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2013

Glad Mubiangata35 minutes ago thanks for sharing good job keep it up

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2013

I am not arrogant As people put and want

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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