Friday, April 25, 2008

I Am Not Able To Say Anything Further, As I Am Gone Once And For All Comments

Rating: 5.0

I came to life
With a gentle electrical shock
And a mild tremor
When an egg from my mother’s ovary
...
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Bashyam Narayanan
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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 September 2008

My 10 for this long poem. Love it.

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Abha Sharma 25 April 2008

i really got lost while reading it...the complete picture flashed before my eyes...i remembered the fetus thrown in Fateh sagar in Udaipur shown by India tv along with the placenta...most heinous crime committed by humans.....very sensitive...I ve no words...for the compassion your lines have for the female child....

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