Im not a poet
thats my life so i wrote it
so everyone will know it
when i die they can show it
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What you write is exactly how I feel. I write my life so when I'm gone at least a few people will know what I felt and what I've been through. You are a wonderful writer and person!
The truth is in your words. You are not a poet, yet; but you have the potential to be a very good one. Keep up the good work. Irene
Read a lot of yo poems... i see a true talent and artist here
Now i write for the bite hopefully it hurts your ears maybe you will realize just what you did through all the years the suppression taught me volume and the violence taught me the aggression you have created a monster now it time YOU learned a lesson it has real meaning behind it, its serious and thoughtful in a tone.. you used some masculine rhyme cool.
i like how it rhymes in a really aggressive way. i really connected with it! great job! :)