Thursday, August 13, 2009

I Am Not A Poem, Will You Read Me? ! Comments

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i am not a ball
don't kick me..

i am not a fish
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HaZeM PaKKaR
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Merna Ibrahim 27 August 2009

Good, newand different poem! ! ......10++++ Merna

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Jennifer Gordon 24 August 2009

Very cute. I liked it

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Patrick A. Martin 24 August 2009

I am not a critic don't ask me. Heehee could not resist I like it lots it's good to smile and It made me do that.10

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sara }i{ 22 August 2009

i like it alot........great one and diffrenet but in a good way ;)

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Neil Mac Neil 22 August 2009

I liked the focus and brevity of the lines. The pace of the poem is great and maintained even though the images shift. I always drawn to economy of thought and line, though it's easy even in my own work to 'wander' about with thought unintentionally. Looking forward to reading more of your work

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deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep! ! ! that s all!

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Wow! This is brilliant! And I love the title! Of course I have to click on something that says '-don't read me'! lol I love the style of 'I am not/ don't'. It flows so well and you got really creative with it. I love it!

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Daryl Cheng 16 August 2009

haha 'I am not a comment, dont notice me.' okay you really have a quirky way of expressing yourself. really interesting

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Chesney Russell 14 August 2009

I am not a comment, dont notice me.

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~*Nezra*~ Farrell 13 August 2009

This poem is cute.But is their a hidden message in between the lines.........9

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