Thursday, March 29, 2018

I Am Not A Mistake! Comments

Rating: 4.2

I am the symbiosis of my mom and dad
I spurn you to interrogate my inherence
exalted I feel under the Creator's clad.
Who are you to chastise his appearance?
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Aloumalove-Alouwou Mandjah
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Akhtar Jawad 11 December 2019

Our life is well planned and it's not a mistake of God.

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Anton 20 March 2019

Congratulations! I like your style and ideas. Keep it up!

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Chinedu Dike 30 April 2018

Really a poignant philosophical rendition set aside for sober reflection. Beautiful piece of poetry written with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing Alouwou.

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maoumba 09 April 2018

Again, you are deep, funny and smart. You poetry never fell.

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Paul D. 03 April 2018

Strong and powerful poem as always.

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Alouwou Mandjah 09 April 2018

Thanks Paul!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 March 2018

You are the son of God like every soul does dram in this Earth. Empowerment is definitely necessary for self development. Every person is a trademark in this Earth. Yes you are not at all a mistake. This poem is very brilliantly penned. An amazing sharing is done here...10...Welcome to PoemHunter.

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Alouwou Mandjah 02 April 2018

Thanks Kumarmani Mahakul

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