Hey, i am a person,
A person of equation,
An equation of truth,
A truth of life,
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Dreams are meant to be broken, but the dream for truth can not be broken. We all part of God individually and all are in search of truth. A beautiful poem.Sushil Kumar Tripathy, Sonepur, Odisha, Please read my poems.
Wow! This is beautiful. I love the rhyme and the metre you use. Beautifully penned and thanks for sharing.
very nice.... got impressed by your thoughts n words... i read all....
Beautiful thoughts filled with positivity in it. Beautiful lines... I want to live my life with courage and convictions, The courage of knowing myself, And the conviction of winning the world. The world where i can step harmony.... I loved reading each lines. Keep writing in the same pace. Beautiful flow of words. Loved it.
A positive write on your life being designed at your will with analogies plenty! In this world of Gods and demi-gods your proclamations are gentle and frank Wish you happier times ahead, Tanya
Very pure in writing, pure thoughts. pure in heart. Wonderful. Rate 10
Being young, you are so full of enthusiasm... of course you are not happy with the existing conditions. You long for a change but knows fully well that a sporadic change cannot take place overnight! You want to be the instrument of change... a change into a world of love where truth rules! I want to live my life with courage and convictions, The courage of knowing myself, And the conviction of winning the world. The world where i can step harmoney, Harmoney which can spread a fragrance, A fragrance of true love, I enjoyed these lines the most! !
Very thoughtful and creative write Tanya. Your thoughts and great expressions are very high and unique. Such lofty words. Keep reaching high.
Beautifully written with humbleness. Thank you for reading my poetry and for your lovely comment. It is an honor that a brilliant writer would call herself a fan of my work. :)
Hi Tanya. I read your poem I am not a God. really It is a great poem with a great value of phylosophy. I am to say you salute. Thanks
Just when you think online poetry can't be anything more than people expressing their opinions in gibberish lines then you stumble on a good piece from a 15 year old like this and then you just open your eyes and WOW! Poetry is still alive is all i can say and you Tanya are one of the people who make it alive. Great piece i've read in a while...10/10. Hope to read more of you
Its BEAUTIFUL... Keep penning poetess. I request u to read my poem 'my space' thanq for the lovely write.
thankyou all for giving me such beautifull comments they encouraged me a lot
Dear Tanya Your sequence in description is unique I just love your way of expression very very beautiful composition Thank and keep it on let your soul burning let your thoughts churning ............... .............
let me say you are incarnation of God, Part and parcel of God, that I know my dear poet, I love your poems.
very very well done tanya...................... i think this poem of urs must get 20 on 10................ excellent job, , keep it up........................ i also invite u to read mine..
Great use of words and had to read it a few times to really take it all in...thank you.