Thursday, February 27, 2014

I Am Not A God Comments

Rating: 3.1

Hey, i am a person,
A person of equation,
An equation of truth,
A truth of life,
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tanya gupta
COMMENTS
Nigel Norton 01 December 2015

Great use of words and had to read it a few times to really take it all in...thank you.

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Sushil Kumar Tripathy 28 May 2014

Dreams are meant to be broken, but the dream for truth can not be broken. We all part of God individually and all are in search of truth. A beautiful poem.Sushil Kumar Tripathy, Sonepur, Odisha, Please read my poems.

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Matthias Pantaleon 28 April 2014

Wow! This is beautiful. I love the rhyme and the metre you use. Beautifully penned and thanks for sharing.

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Saleem Zidi 27 April 2014

very creative. i read all. it is a master piece poem. i like it

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Perveiz Ali 27 April 2014

very nice.... got impressed by your thoughts n words... i read all....

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Geetha Jayakumar 26 April 2014

Beautiful thoughts filled with positivity in it. Beautiful lines... I want to live my life with courage and convictions, The courage of knowing myself, And the conviction of winning the world. The world where i can step harmony.... I loved reading each lines. Keep writing in the same pace. Beautiful flow of words. Loved it.

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Dinesan Madathil 25 April 2014

A positive write on your life being designed at your will with analogies plenty! In this world of Gods and demi-gods your proclamations are gentle and frank Wish you happier times ahead, Tanya

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Captain Herbert Poetry 19 April 2014

Very pure in writing, pure thoughts. pure in heart. Wonderful. Rate 10

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Valsa George 15 April 2014

Being young, you are so full of enthusiasm... of course you are not happy with the existing conditions. You long for a change but knows fully well that a sporadic change cannot take place overnight! You want to be the instrument of change... a change into a world of love where truth rules! I want to live my life with courage and convictions, The courage of knowing myself, And the conviction of winning the world. The world where i can step harmoney, Harmoney which can spread a fragrance, A fragrance of true love, I enjoyed these lines the most! !

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Patricia Grantham 09 April 2014

Very thoughtful and creative write Tanya. Your thoughts and great expressions are very high and unique. Such lofty words. Keep reaching high.

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Katelin Taylor 09 April 2014

Beautifully written with humbleness. Thank you for reading my poetry and for your lovely comment. It is an honor that a brilliant writer would call herself a fan of my work. :)

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Ahatisham Alam 05 April 2014

how you think a flawless flow of enchanted words!

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Subhakanta Sahu 26 March 2014

Hi Tanya. I read your poem I am not a God. really It is a great poem with a great value of phylosophy. I am to say you salute. Thanks

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Thomas Duncky 22 March 2014

Just when you think online poetry can't be anything more than people expressing their opinions in gibberish lines then you stumble on a good piece from a 15 year old like this and then you just open your eyes and WOW! Poetry is still alive is all i can say and you Tanya are one of the people who make it alive. Great piece i've read in a while...10/10. Hope to read more of you

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Shantanu Mukherjee 14 March 2014

nice one.Great lines

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 09 March 2014

Its BEAUTIFUL... Keep penning poetess. I request u to read my poem 'my space' thanq for the lovely write.

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Tanya Gupta 09 March 2014

thankyou all for giving me such beautifull comments they encouraged me a lot

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V P Mahur 02 March 2014

Dear Tanya Your sequence in description is unique I just love your way of expression very very beautiful composition Thank and keep it on let your soul burning let your thoughts churning ............... .............

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Gajanan Mishra 28 February 2014

let me say you are incarnation of God, Part and parcel of God, that I know my dear poet, I love your poems.

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Shraddha The Poetess 28 February 2014

very very well done tanya...................... i think this poem of urs must get 20 on 10................ excellent job, , keep it up........................ i also invite u to read mine..

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