Thursday, April 28, 2005

I Am No Longer Comments

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i am no longer the girl who sits alone
i am no longer the girl without a friend
i am no longer the girl with the knife
i am no longer the girl who looks at sorrow
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megan watts
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Sara S 18 February 2009

What Amanda said....

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Amanda Grimes 25 May 2006

i think the poem was deep and that i could relate to it it was well written and thoughtful

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Heather Donovan 12 September 2005

Hm, this was a very deep poem, I liked it.

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Poetry Hound 28 April 2005

Megan, repeating the first part of a line over and over is one of the oldest cliches in poetry. Perhaps try something different.

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