i am no longer the girl who sits alone
i am no longer the girl without a friend
i am no longer the girl with the knife
i am no longer the girl who looks at sorrow
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i think the poem was deep and that i could relate to it it was well written and thoughtful
Megan, repeating the first part of a line over and over is one of the oldest cliches in poetry. Perhaps try something different.
What Amanda said....