I Am No Better Than You Comments

You have expressed your anger and hatred in very apt words.but your admission in the last stanza expresses your greatness.

Deep sincerity, pain and anger move this strong poem in a very realistic and well written way. We feel it all.!

even raged by vengeance, it is poetry

So true. Revenge is often forced upon us. Could be God willing. There is a limit for being cheated, Powerful penning 10+

So true, there is one thing about a man/woman of rage readily expressed is: there is not so more than what we see, no scheming inside, no hiding the feelings. Now, there is another one with murder in mind, but he/she can smile still.

I hate the way you talk/I hate the way you smile/I hate the very sight of you....intense hatred for a dishonest/immoral follow is brilliantly expressed! This poem has many facets to seriously be pondered! A wonderful work!

I am no better than you I let hatred take over I sought vengeance For I am just human. Human mind, problems, cheating. revenging............ thinking of all these. the forming of the m ind and thoughts in this background. how grave is the situation........ so many thoughts came to my mind my dear poetess. thanku. for this poem which makes the reader think. tony

Well penned. So touching. Haunting expression. Appropriate title.

'I am no better than you'............. This is a vital realization. If it is there, even if one is angry at the other for an offence, it is easier to forgive. It is also natural for anyone to be angry, but that anger has to be under check! You have expressed your feelings so openly and naturally! A great read! (10)

A concrete message is given by you in this poem astutely. I found here strong expression on revenge as fallows..... I hate the way you talk I hate the way you smile I hate the very sight of you I curse the ground On which you stand. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poems.

(cont.) (cont.) it's been said: vengeance is the Lord's. but under the circumstances stated in your poem, i BELIEVE vengeance SHOULD be YOURS! ! ! go get them, Rose Marie! ! ! [ besides, i no longer believe i have a Lord! ! ] bri :)

(cont.) i love stanza 4, BUT here: And you seriously wished, Bri'd use And you seriously wish, keeping the present tense of 'wish' with crawl. am i 'right'? and I let hatred took over.....take over? slow down. proofread a bit more, PLEASE. ha ha ha. YES, i AM better than you (are) ! ! ! hee-hee

I am no better than you/I let hatred took over/I sought vengeance/For I am just human. -The politeness of the expression makes this poem endearing! Pleasure visiting it again!

I liked the poem it was really good

All humans have the same emotions. We are unique but the same in many respects.

Rose Marie Juan Austin looks an angry teen aged girl in this poem, obviously such a girl looks more beautiful, and she looks more beautiful in this different poem.

The revenge is justified because...You are a fraud/You tricked everyone/By the power of your social position/And with the stroke of a pen.......thrilling expression Rose! Liked it......10

I am just human! ! And to err is human. Thanks for sharing.

Such a well-expressed emotion, Rose Marie..... A full 10+++