Monday, April 6, 2009

I Am Nature Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am a strand of lightning
shooting strait across the sky
not waiting for the day to go by
moving fast across the sky
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gabby chamberland
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COMMENTS
Carol Gall 15 August 2009

like this gabby waterfalls are so beautiful

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Carol Gall 08 May 2009

as the waterfal goes over the cliff it pools into a beautiful river good write 10

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 13 April 2009

Love nature...a good start Gabby - keep it up. Had it's visual effect...

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Sarah Nugent 07 April 2009

great poem Gabby, its very descriptive and imaginative. keep writing

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