Monday, February 23, 2009

I Am Missing You Comments

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The petal said
I miss my dear colour
the lovely coat of red
that it yester had
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Eyan Desir 01 May 2009

Poetic For sure this Lady Is in a next level Of writtin poems Good work Lady top marks

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Edna Javelosa 02 April 2009

excellent write...what could have been inseparable can still be separated in time...and we could only wail for that what is lost..colors will fade..green leaves fall and rot, its true color strip from its core..calm sea can be disturbed and agitated by earthquakes..you really painted a thousand pictures in this poem with your wonderful choice of words...

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