Wednesday, January 21, 2009

I Am Me Comments

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My mind goes through a lot
Two many unhinged objects
Shoved into a pocket-sized area
A curled web of thoughts
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Paul Celano
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Barbara Terry 21 January 2009

For sure, Paul. This is all we are and more. We can never live another's life, but we can be strong in our own skin, and be the person we are. A really wonderful, very well thought out poem of introspction. There is just one error I saw. In the 4th stanza, second line, you wrote 'coded' and I think you meant 'coated'. Thank you for sharing, Paul and this gets a 10+ from me. Love & hugs, Barbara

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