Friday, July 15, 2016

I Am Many Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am many "me"…

Having a rummage through my soul,
My fermenting mind tracing any signs of me..
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iqra hassan
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Rajnish Manga 26 September 2017

Insightful and revealing portrayal of human nature which consists of good and bad shades. Many are the layers, on a single soul laid.. Stuck in the dilemma, my senses all foggy, Jekyll and mr. Hyde both visible at once, Will my fingers detangle from the whirls of my soul ever?

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Muhammad Ali 14 August 2016

many me, not bad. so it is natural. nice poem with shade of sadness

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Kelly Kurt 16 July 2016

Very well written, Iqra. Welcome to Poemhunter

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Iqra Hassan 17 July 2016

thanks a ton sir!

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Elizabeth Semende 16 July 2016

Great poem Iqra. I enjoyed reading it.

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Iqra Hassan 17 July 2016

much honoured: -)

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Fabrizio Frosini 15 July 2016

a very good poem your 1st at PoemHunter, Iqra. Thanks for sharing and.. keep posting

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Iqra Hassan 17 July 2016

beyond honoured sir: -)

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Akhtar Jawad 15 July 2016

Too bitter, but must be welcomed, as it's truth. I don't believe it's first poem of Iqra, may be her first poem submitted at PH but the perfect style of discussing and describing the bitter truths shows that she is a polished poetess. I rate it as a wonderful poem.

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Iqra Hassan 17 July 2016

thank you for reading and analysing sir: -) Its your highness if you consider me polished and yes its not my first poem: -)

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Menato San 15 July 2016

It's very beautiful poem.Thank for sharing

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Iqra Hassan 17 July 2016

honoured: -)

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Nosheen Irfan 15 July 2016

Here is a woman who is trying to discover her true self from the myriad of shades n colors she has. Self-introspection is a great way of finding who we are and can lead us to self-discovery- -the true purpose of our existence. The picture portrayed here of the dilemma of a woman who is perceived n judged by the society is very soul-stirring n a lot of women can relate to it. A great start to your poetic journey. Keep it up. Best of luck.

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Iqra Hassan 17 July 2016

honoured ma'am: -) thank you for reading.

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