Tuesday, September 15, 2015

I Am Lying On The Grass Comments

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I am lying on the grass
Look up at the cobalt blue sky
Clouds like white feathers
Linger slowly on the canvas
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Cigeng Zhang
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Edward Kofi Louis 07 July 2016

Taking a rest and, viewing the muse of nature! ! Nice work.

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Amitava Sur 30 September 2015

Looking at the floating clouds lying on green grass id very nostalgic to me reminding my early days. You drew a nice imagery on love seeing the floating white clouds and liked your emotion you drew.

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David Wood 17 September 2015

Lying in the grass looking up at the clouds, I used to do this and wonder. Brings back memories. Good poem with good imagery.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 17 September 2015

Good imagery, Loved reading the poem

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Omar Eldamsheety 16 September 2015

So nice, I think he miss you when he see flowers.

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