Thursday, March 12, 2020

I Am Lucky Comments

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I am lucky for where I was
With mom and dad pouring love
Getting cuddled in grandmas lap
Sleeping in warm kisses soothing waltz
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 13 March 2020

I am lucky for where I will be Bathed in the glory of His love With prayers flowing from lips your last line do modify

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 March 2020

Four beautiful quatrains full of luck, filled with love and security lead us to Him through prayers flowing from lips! Bathed in the glory of His love With prayers flowing from lips From the worldly chores I will be free, lean on Him and from the worldly chores I will be free....................Impressing poem so true. A 10 Full Score for this touching, dashing poem. God's Blessings in Abundance for you and your beloved family.

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