Saturday, May 2, 2009

I Am Love. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am the way you see the world.
I prompt the thoughts you have every day.
Find me in your gasp of delight
When viewing dawn's sunrise, then I will stay.
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Fay Slimm
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Shashendra Amalshan 19 May 2009

yes a wonderful poem...sweeet poem..thanks

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Randy Hogan 15 May 2009

Mother Earth read this poem...... And she cries for the beauty and warmth for you abide to the words of love 10++++++++++ Sweet Flower soooooo many xoxo

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Michele Hegarty 14 May 2009

Dear Fay, I love this, staying open hearted and open minded, plus taking care of the precious feelings we can have (if we're lucky) is so important. We may get knocks and disappointments but if we keep the faith then love is there, family, friends, animals........Thank you for this one. Michele x

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 May 2009

Lucid and lovely poem.10++

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Sid John Gardner. 11 May 2009

A beautiful inspirational poem Fay.Thanks for sharing. Sid xx

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C. P. Sharma 06 May 2009

Love is the fire, Love inspires; Young and old, Nature's gold In love enfolds CP

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Catrina Heart 05 May 2009

I will be fire, in your breast, Setting ablaze all the dreams of your mind. I am your scales, the weights you use To judge motives fairly of humankind. --------- fabulous stanza written about love and friendship...divinity all over! 10+++

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Reshma Ramesh 05 May 2009

wow........beautiful.......

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i think i saw 'love' physically in her shinning radiance, reading this piece.. i guess that is what captivating means... beautiful

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Ency Bearis 02 May 2009

captivating verses...well expressed nicely...10

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 02 May 2009

Well that's nice fay, me too :) laughs loverly write.. Andy 10

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Tsira Goge 02 May 2009

Fay, Is wonderful.... 10x10... Tsira

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Sandra Martyres 02 May 2009

Just one word for this poem of yours Fay....Lovely.10++++

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Sue Sie 02 May 2009

Ooo Fay...this is a meaningful poem...great feeling comes from it...well written..10++..Like the last two lines especially Sue

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Fiona Davidson 02 May 2009

What a wonderful write Fay...you have captured love in this lovely sonnet...Fi 10+++

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Fay Slimm

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