Saturday, October 15, 2016

I Am Lost Searching You...... Comments

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I am lost searching you
Over the mountains,
Over the rivers,
Over the bridges of love.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Bri Edwards 12 January 2017

favorite lines: Seasons came and went by The eggs hatched and birds fly From caterpillar to butterfly But my search for you is still dry sounds like you are lovesick! good luck! bri ;) i would stick for in front of You.

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Unwritten Soul 15 October 2016

Oh Asim, This poem is just beautiful and i am lost while reading it...i really get connected to it..it does speak about life for everyone..so beautifully and lovely done

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Sathyanarayana M V S 15 October 2016

You have a wonderful touch my friend! A very nice poem with stunning imagery

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 15 October 2016

Excellent paraphrasing alone is sufficient to love this poem. Thanks for sharing. x

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