I Am Lost Comments

Very easy diction A nice and small poem, that can enjoy every one. A normal reader does not need a dictionary when going thru this poem. Keep it up Nooruddeen

a nice poem, full of wisdom, and images.well done.

it is so emotional..! i like it...

Discover the allah in yourself...you will see all the doubts melt. and u will regain your confidence back. a sad poem....hopelessness portraied well though

i like the part that has hope.... another race.. as you say it...

woooooooow, you just said what i feel, lost lost lost

as i read this poem i can feel the fear of being lost. but in life our roads we take will always have bumps in it or detours in which makes us swerve from our paths but do not fear for we all eventually return to them. i really do like this poem.

Allaha will lead you, from one race to the next, with little if any breath, so you wont cry...iip

very nice potent and feeling lines there did a nice job at communicating the feelings.. its ten from me cheers

Amen, my lovely poet, that was very evocative and strong piece fine piece of poetry, anyone can relate to, you have put your heart and soul in it lovely :)

Amen, thoughtful piece, thanks for sharing

keep making dua3, keep praying... inshallah the answers will come clear... Allah never puts you through something you can't handle, be patient. nice write. Salam

Nice write...do not worry the answers will come as you keep asking the right questions...We are all born with innate strengths to work out the answers for ourselves.10

really good poem 10 ++++

hey buddy gud write.. the answers r on their way..coz u have started the first step of askin questions which so many people never embark upon...just keep the faith....n look to God..: -) 10++++++

a beautiful poem dear tara.and that is the case of the poets who always seek another race one day they are cheerful other days sadly amazed...well done..10++++