I Am Lost Comments

this is very nice jen...keep writing.

I once was lost but now I am found Amid shattered dreams and broken crowns -ending always matters..and here again it was just amazing.. finding someone in dreams that too scattered is an innovative thinking but very powerful.. got 10++

Good write well written 10s

I see nothing to be lost about, think on it. Evidently she is crushed with a heavy heart. I hope it HEALS and know that it will.

aziz, I am glad that through our private tète-à-tète we were able to overcome this miscommunication. i look for nothing but friendship and support through this website, in which i have met kind, creative, compassionate, talented and caring people of all ages and nations. we all share the same aspirations, to share our thoughts and poetry with all members of the site. our craft comes in all divergent styles, genres, and ingenuity. some are satisfied with thier skill level and some desire tutelage. but in the end the ideal is still the same, to share and find companionship through our work. now that we have overcome ourdifferences and miscommunication i hope that we can start anew, perhaps finding a mutual respect for each others work. my sincere best regards, J.C.

really like the flow of this 1. a lil diff from your other ones but just as good....

I think I made a mistake here. I should have been a little careful for some sensitive and now I realize, after she eloquantly explained to me and belatedly a very creative person. Somewhere in the middle I thought in my haste that there was some uncalled for submission to fate that the poetess began by criticizing. I will read more and if I caused you any hurt, I apologize.

Jen, There is no need for you to be nasty. I said what I felt unless you want me to lie about it. I am sorry you took this very personal and I promise not to read your work or to comment on it. I am barely ready for such dejected quarrels. I have more important things to do. Thanks alot but my true colours you will never be able to grasp.

aziz, i think you were lost when you came onto my poetry page and decided to make a comment like that. it's people like you that put to shame open poetry sites. thank you for your comments and showing your true colors.

I read this twice and now I am lost.

realize you 've brought me to this place I am bound You are to leave me here with no return I once was lost but now I am found Amid shattered dreams and broken crowns these are great lines.............I once was lost, now I am found....good poem

fantastic keep up the great work and don't stop writing...