The old and feeble man is
Lying in his bed,
He is very ill,
Suddenly he anxiously says,
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A well penned poem. Truly splendid and poetic....5 stars*****
This demonstrates the power of a well-chosen title coupled to an intriguing beginning two lines to get the readers' rapt attention! ! Top marks!
GOOD HE GOT AN ADVANCE WARNING ELSE HE WOULD HAVE BEEN TAKEN BY SURPRISE GLAD YOU MET HIM BEFORE HIS LAST WHISTLINFG AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA RRRRRRRRRRR BE HAPPY FOR HIM
A wonderful write dear Anjandev! Make it a habit of writing something daily. Knowledge and experience comes with age. Be a long distance runner. God bless you!