I Am Killing My Mother Comments

Sir this is a magnificent write. You have penned it so well. The imagery and metaphorical execution if mother and child is explict. Well penned.

A well crafted poem and brilliantly narrated. To my Poem List.

Powerful and beautiful poem. Very insightful. I concur with Poetess Bipasha's comment.

A thoughtful poem with a striking title.

Wonderful poem sir, How thoughtful of you, the greed of men is draining the blood of Mother Earth, by depleting all resources Whatever they can lay their Hands to the least of availability. You have truly pointed out they are harming the future Not only own children but that of the entire world. Keep writing sir.

Wonderful Lines I must say in my meek presence though now are will not see the virgin snow falls, I will not see those lake and streams I will not see the virgin rivers, I will not see the virgin oceans, That will be a virgin race of my brothers and sisters, Smiling in the cradle of her lovely arms! .. a great Bow sir and 100++!

Yes wonderfully told I am poisoning my Mother.. my Mother earth! ! Thank you for your Great perception and words and subtly as poetic! !

Our atmosphere is getting poisoned by all kinds of pollution. The problem has nicely been articulated and also presented the case of mother earth who is at the receiving end. But the ultimate victim is not the planet but the life on this planet. Thanks for sharing.

Earth is important to us. it holds memories that is imaginable. it gave us life, love, home i liked the poem.

I am so amazed at the brazen fast paced concretization around us...at time I think the single and those without children are the luckiest, at least they don't carry the worry of a future without water and earth and food for their children and grand children. Well written Sir, I just wish people would pay heed...

Very lovely, amazing & intersting..

Truly said, we are killing our mother. How does this statement sounds but still we take it lightly

With pollution, we are slowly killing mother Earth! Unless we change our habits, human race will be subjected to manifold threats! We are on the verge of extinction! A timely warning!

A poem of great message........................10