Tuesday, April 21, 2009

I Am Just Writing To Tell You Comments

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Before you left I never got the chance
The train was coming and things were complicated
The words that I never said flew over the oceans with you
They kept you safe when the bombs boomed and the gunshots grew
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Brennah Bailey
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Megan Collins 23 April 2009

I got chills just reading that! That would be so hard to go through, even thinking of it just kills you inside. I love the idea of the poem

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Brittanie Thornton 23 April 2009

That is so sad, but great ending. I love the way you pull it together at the end, great job!

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