Oh mom I am in your lap
Every day in cheer I do clap.
By grace sure I get you ever.
I walk around forget never.
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Broad visions you ever fix for me, Through your eyes world I do see....... A mother is priceless. In the lap of a mother, every child finds security! As long as the child is around the mother, her watchful eyes will follow him and he is free from all dangers. A lovely poem extolling the greatness of a mother!
God's lap is nice. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet. Living with God is good.
The safest place on earth and the lap where we dream so many things and listens to everything with attention, a perfect learning place, ....Loved it 1+++ You only teach me to sing for God, I know him mother and do nod.
picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xThis is beautiful. I really felt this piece and think it is written rather well. 2 Dec 2014 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of Fay Slimm xA pleasure to read in these troublesome days due honour to mother from a grateful son. A lovely poem indeed. 2 Dec 2014 by Fay Slimm | Reply picture of mahesh nanayakkara xGreat read! 12 Dec 2014 by mahesh nanayakkara | Reply picture of Charuk Suebrak xNice one! 26 Jan 2015 by Charuk Suebrak | Reply Note: These review comments are received via poetfreak (PF)
Remaining in God's lap is good. God is mother like our mother. Remaining with mother is nice.