****i Am In Love With..................... Comments

Hello Passionate Flower. I enjoyed this wonderful little love poem. I have been away awhile and wanted to thank you for your great support on my poetry in the past. Happy New Year! Loyd

wow that is truely amazing i know how that is being in love and then the person has to leave i love it and you r an awesome talented writer keep on writing :) love tin mouse

Great poem Passionate flower

Passionate flower, that is a wonderful poem.

A beautiful expression of an ethereal vision of love.

The first kisses and touches have touched your heart and bloomed. It will continue for you as long you have the aesthetic longing and love.

Love has the tendency of giving hallucination to a person whom is so passionate to be loved by someone, and that someone could be anybody.Its like a kinda mad rush.

Hi Passionate Flower - I am honoured to make the first response to this elegant poem. Like the other two this poem is full of fragrant emotion. The first verse has a lovely paradox 'A Ghost who! can't see - I saw him once! ' - LOVELY. We all have a vision in our hearts (especially when we are young!) of the perfect lover. Gentle, handsome, lovely and with perfet kisses which is the sweetest and purest expression of love. When the vision fades it does braek our hearts, but those of us who are older know - that in God's good order of things - the ephemeral vision will soon be relaced by reality. Lovely poem in content, form and language a well earned 10!

I like this... um, where exactly does this poem end? i suspect that you wrote comments in those last 3 lines and not actually part of the poem, but I could be wrong.