Monday, March 2, 2009

I Am In Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Seeing the smile on a pretty face,
Wanting to hear the steps that race,
Nostalgic smell I always chase.
Tasty kiss that wants to embrace,
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I am in love too with not one, but two and not two, but three But they don't love me.

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Surya . 12 August 2009

good, tasty and fragrant voted10 surya

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Kesav Easwaran 01 June 2009

good poem, Jayram...love feelings and their related emotions are beautifully portrayed there...thanks...10

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Barry A. Lanier 02 March 2009

Really enjoying the flow and the word association which and whereas each metric line induces a thought in the reader..........bravo...

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C. P. Sharma 02 March 2009

Jayram, Your concluding couplet is the gist of love. A divine flight of love. CP

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