! ! ! I Am In A Time Infinitesimal! ! ! Comments

boat still moves trudging path by the truth along depthless sojourn of uncertainty as despised looking to the deathless journey ahead of timeless death I may disappear from the dust but the raved up tones ------ stupendous imagery and diction......such a poetic soft beauty your words are...10+++

I AM IN A TIME INFINITESIMAL BUT THIS POEM MAKE YOU FEEL AS YOU ARE AN INFINITE SOUL..................... GOOD WRITE...............

I enjoyed this, it was really good.

I can grasp the idea of this poem is showing the little effect one can have on their surroundings and others within those surroundings, but it is very wordy. I think you are letting your scientific left brain dominate your creative right and so you add more than is necessary in an effort to get the point across. It is a good poem but not easily understood, like quantum mechanics

doc you're in tranch so deep... i can't reach you. surface a bit.

This has to be a put on. These poems are not good.

Dear Dr. Kar, I read your poem over several times. You did not indicate which poem you wanted me to read. So I read the second poem of yours on your list, as it was 'new.' I said this to a woman tonight and it applies to you too. You write like John Ashbury, where it's like a kaleidoscope of images and words. If you had to state what this poem is about, could you? When Ashbury is questioned about his poems, he's at a loss because he claims he doesn't know what they mean. Your poem held me with its centrifugal force. It has its own logic.

A journey, a voyage in search of truth, effectively penned with wonderful lyrical descrptions...10 Rema

Novel adventure whatever be the play of distortion around or everywhere as nothing can stop time's journey in Space endless!