I Am In A Strange Jerk Comments

The song of your mellow voice within, really made me feel of it down and at same time helping me understanding of what you having. Life in this earth however nothing but a temporary that filled of pain and happiness, the path that it lead us in our way, the breathes that still remaining....shouldnt be wasted for grieving and mourning, although we cant avoid that but we can blur it with so much things, beautiful and vivid...regret is fine but to change will make it more defined. As long as breathe is for our body, do change for the right..and leave not.

کسنے مانگا تھا کب کسی سے قرض ھاٗے مجبور ہیں ازل سے ہم زندگی جیسی شے کے بدلے میں اپنے جزبات ہیں رہن اے دوست Akhtar Jawad

A lot of people can relate to it. Somehow a lot of us carry the pain of lost love. A good start, depicting the bitterness of failed love.

A very nice poem showing disloyal love. I like how u employed the word mortgage for that. Super. Pls do comment on my latest writing prose too titled, 'stand tall and proud yet humbly bow'

Write comment. A great start, Akram. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks