I'm a lost moon in day
Like lost night in night
Lost as a light in light
I'm lost in your longing
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you will get so lost in love, that you forget 'who you are'. that's the power of love. a gr8888t write. a ten, if ph allows mw to rate it. ph issues going on.
‘…I'm lost in your longing // But I am not lost in you…’ Touchy and moving…enjoyed...thanks... Ms. Nivedita UK
nice visual metaphor very well combined with a double simile: I'm a lost moon in day Like lost night in night Lost as a light in light wonderful symbolistic poem 10+++++++++
what an ego of Narcissism alive in this present day's.... what a laugh my dear friend....so fantastic and eloquent in mood.... beautiful poem.... a God bless, a 10 with a big Star.....
We all feel we may lose our true self in our efforts to impress the ones we love.But love is never about turning into someone else. Our true self emerges stronger and brighter than before. Well expressed
a poem of self with great conviction, even there are presence of tides and wanders, firmness held you well...nice piece! ! !
After many twists and turns, finally 'I am what I am' comes out. A nice poem.
Its a good write... maybe you should of being a little clearer...10s
Stay the course. Don't be distracted by life. Always be you. Beautifully crafted.
this is AWESOME! ! ! ! ! I really like this one! ! ! !) (10)
Very nice! I enjoyed this piece.