Wednesday, December 16, 2009

I Am I Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm a lost moon in day
Like lost night in night
Lost as a light in light
I'm lost in your longing
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Kranthi Pothineni
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Seamus O Brian 19 June 2015

Very nice! I enjoyed this piece.

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Walterrean Salley 24 December 2009

Always stay true to self.

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Louis Rams 19 December 2009

p.s. it's not allowing votes. sorry

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Louis Rams 19 December 2009

p.s. it's not allowing votes. sorry

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Louis Rams 19 December 2009

you will get so lost in love, that you forget 'who you are'. that's the power of love. a gr8888t write. a ten, if ph allows mw to rate it. ph issues going on.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 19 December 2009

quite touchy... very smooth and nice flow!

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 19 December 2009

‘…I'm lost in your longing // But I am not lost in you…’ Touchy and moving…enjoyed...thanks... Ms. Nivedita UK

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Anju Addanki 18 December 2009

thats a good one cleverly penned

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Marieta Maglas 18 December 2009

nice visual metaphor very well combined with a double simile: I'm a lost moon in day Like lost night in night Lost as a light in light wonderful symbolistic poem 10+++++++++

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Antonio Liao 17 December 2009

what an ego of Narcissism alive in this present day's.... what a laugh my dear friend....so fantastic and eloquent in mood.... beautiful poem.... a God bless, a 10 with a big Star.....

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Padmapriya Boddapati 16 December 2009

We all feel we may lose our true self in our efforts to impress the ones we love.But love is never about turning into someone else. Our true self emerges stronger and brighter than before. Well expressed

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Catrina Heart 16 December 2009

a poem of self with great conviction, even there are presence of tides and wanders, firmness held you well...nice piece! ! !

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Rajaram Ramachandran 16 December 2009

After many twists and turns, finally 'I am what I am' comes out. A nice poem.

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Eyan Desir 16 December 2009

Its a good write... maybe you should of being a little clearer...10s

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Walterrean Salley 16 December 2009

Stay the course. Don't be distracted by life. Always be you. Beautifully crafted.

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Janell Cressman 16 December 2009

this is AWESOME! ! ! ! ! I really like this one! ! ! !) (10)

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Joseph Poewhit 16 December 2009

Must be ourselves in life

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