Saturday, June 25, 2011

I Am Home To Stay... Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have seen my true reflection
A fraction of a second I recognized
The light behind my tired eyes
There is a wisdom in pain
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chantelle ribeiro
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 25 June 2011

Great poem. I loved the way you described the whole thing. The poem was written well with nice texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Best regards Akmal

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